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"I love your story and would love to read more"

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DESPERATE

"Im completely in love im on chapter 35 im sad its almost over i cant wait to read more from you P.S this book needs a book 2 and 3 and 4"

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Wow. Wow wow.

"I couldn't stop crying. Had to put it down a few times, cuz it hit home, one too many times. I loved the book. It was unpredictable. I loved the rollercoaster thrill of it all. At first I thought it's another cliche, but I was Soo wrong. I can't wait to read more from her. Beautifully written. I love it. "

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Bruh

"The feels I have right now can not be explained "

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Desperate

"I loved this story and the fact that I never actually knew where the ride was going to take me. There was another twist around every corner and I was all but satisfied with the way it truly came together almost realistically in the end. Prime example of how time can heal and how things do eventually fall into place <3 "

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Emotional rollercoaster

"If you look beyond the typos and some wrong word choices---I suspect the writer is not a native English speaker---the story was quite amazing. It takes you on a very wild and exciting ride but not necessarily where you think. And you end up in a very unexpected destination too. I really don't want to give too much away, so bravo on capturing so many raw and real emotions. The doubts, the highs, the beauty of friendships and also the various just the modern family dynamics. Looking forward to more writings from you. Thank you!"

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Plot twists were great! Loved it!!!

"The plot twists were amazing! I read this faster than any other story before, it kept me that engaged! I enjoyed it a lot. Actually wish it was longer, kinda got upset when the pages left got less and less. Loved the ending though! Great work! "

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Great 👍

"What a good story full of twists and getting deep into reasoning behind behaviour of various sides of love. Enjoyed so much!"

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Just Wow

"This was intense, and i loved every bit of it. ❤️ Full of emotions and twists. A wonderful book. Compliments to the author "

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Desperate

"It's a good read!! I enjoyed reading it!! Thank you for sharing your work!!"

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Shhhiiittttttt

"HOLY FUCKIN SHIT BALLS!!!!! This is a story that I will not forget because of the twists and turns, ups and downs it had! Super fucking good!!!!!!!!!"

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Awesome book

"I really like the way this story was written and the twists that were brought about in the story. It's unique and it keeps you interested. I had a hard time letting go of the book. Despite the happy ending I didn't really like it because it felt a bit rushed. Just the last chapter though. All in all this was a very good book and it's totally recommended "

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Desperate

"When one is overwhelmed with temptations and difficulties, the person gets lost and heartbroken. He/she needs a guiding touch and loving heart to pick up the pieces and be whole again. The story is quite realistic and it keeps me guessing what happens next. The readers could pick up some real life lessons here. It needs a little editing to correct some grammar mistakes to make this novel a perfect one. In general, this is an excellent piece. 👍👍"

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Veronica and Frey (Godfrey)

"This is a great story. Laughed, cried, angered, aggrieved, all of the emotions. I'm sure anyone who reads this will be well pleased!! "

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Desperate

"Absolutely not what I was expecting, but a totally amazing story. I absolutely loved this. "

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Desperate

"One of the best books i ever read. "

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Surprising

"Really enjoyed it and would’ve definitely recommend this book 📖 to anyone despite the minor errors. Great twisting of the plots... It had me in so much suspense that I couldn’t stop reading it. Who said that there can’t be a happy ending, it just might take a longer time than what you had expected. Continue the great job 👏 "

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Desperate

"its so good <3"

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Love it!

"A lot of twists, love the characters even Jax. Can't figure her out in the beginning but Ronnie grew on me. As every character did. It's raw, but written wich such a finesse, that everyone can relate to it. Thanks for this amazing book❤"

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🥰🥰🥰

"He's gotta have the tat on his back, it totally fits"

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