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Great

"Absolutely love it so far. Only misstep I've seen is use of the 'r' word. Just one that makes me cringe every time I see it."

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Yes

"I’ve been reading this book for a while and it’s great it’s very detailed the mom kept pissing me off tho but I still like the story"

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Good

"❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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No Time Like Now

"This was a great read! The mother was a real tyrant, thank God her dad finally had her back towards the end."

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Good story

"I lked it."

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No time like now

"Great story. You gotta make the rest snappy.... Pleasssssssse"

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Can't wait for the rest

"I really like the few chapters that I've read. I can't wait to read the rest."

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Casual youth writing

"Nothing much about professional writing dear 👍"

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Good story

"It is a great story and I read it through in a few days- although I am a bit disappointed about the development of their relationship.. Don't get me wrong, it's not that I need a making out scene, but a bit more details would have been nice. I also think that the ending is rushed and I am rooting for a sequel where her mother accepts her like she is :)"

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Enjoying the story

"I'm enjoying the budding romance between Niamh and Aspen. Looking forward to reading what's next. I also have a girl in my college class named Niamh, and I have never heard of that name before her. Now it's surprising to see it in a story :)"

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No time like moe

"It was OK. I found it abit boring Sorry "

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