Major Creep Factor!

"I swear, this story reminds me of driving from Wilkesboro, N.C. (I'd been to Merlefest) back to my hotel in Jonesville. It was a foggy night and I missed a turn (in the days before GPS), and ended up on some dark back road in who knows where! I retraced my steps and FINALLY found the freeway. I've never been so glad to see an Interstate in my life! LOLOLOL. Anyway, great tension buildup and awesome creepy factor. The monster you don't see is always scarier than the one you can see, at least according to Steven Spielberg. I think he's right. Good, tight writing. Good work!"