An 18" Journey by Sarge at Inkitt
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An 18" Journey

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Summary

Sometimes the longest journey in the world is very short. It is the journey from the head to the heart.

Genre
Poetry
Author
Sarge
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

Sometimes an 18 inch journey is the longest journey in the world.

You know something abstractly, in your brain

You know you should do something,

Or stop doing something.

You should not let people use you.

You should not be their door mat.

You should not go to far.

When the man who asked you to go an extra mile says stop

Maybe you should.

But you go further and sometimes are abusive when you do.

You go further and abuse yourself.

You go further and abuse your family.

You go further and abuse your friends.

You knew you should not have done it.

But sometimes an 18 inch journey,

From your brain to your heart,

Is the longest journey in the world.

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wonderfully written, insightful. thank you so much!

7 years

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