What is your opinion?
The story is so good I cried my eyes out
"This story is amazing "
Loved it
"Loved it, Expressed so well."
Obsession
"Hope to read the end soon, amazing story line, cant stop reading, love it so much"
Interesting
"Not bad at all, a good idea, interesting 👍"
amazing
"the story is painful and beautiful in its own way"
Obsession
"Story is good but end is not expected like this after so many efforts"
Ohno moments..!
"Pleaaaseeeeeee give it a good end...! Tell us everythinggg..! Their escape, Dmitri shattered as he will not be able to do what he wanted, Jordan and Jessica happy ever after..! Please just a happy ending..!? Add moreee to it plsss I don't want to finish this..!❤"
Obsession
"The plot is okey. Grammars error and the names sometimes a bit confusing. But so far so good. Cant wait for it to complete. "
Obsession
""Obsession" is not bad, but this story had the same typical storyline in most Indian movies. You could attract the readers well, as the plot of the story is not bad. Your writings were good as well but to be honest I lost interest especially in the fight scene. A typical dramatic fighting scene! The fighting scene was soo predictable, Especially are those who have watch Hindi Movies before. Jessica's death was a bit new and shocking as well. I am a happy endings fan as well but there are some stories that deserve a separation-ending; this story does not deserve a sad ending. My advice would be you better write something that is not soo predictable. I enjoyed it! But I believe you can do better! All the best! Looking forwards to your next work! -Afshara Chowdhury"
Good but grammatical errors
"The book is good but has some grammatical errors."
