Well, I guess I have only one word to say about this story, "Storm". If I start from the first, I would say Gen's friend, Rachel seems to have a perfect personality understand; that's why she has her a choker with "SLUT" written on it. A virgin turned into sex addicted. Gen was sexually attracted to Dominic, but it doesn't mean that she must submit to every Blackstone. I have heard that brothers like to share girls sometimes but sister as well, not that I heard of. With a slight dominant voice, Gen wets his panties. I understand that seeing an attractive man around you makes you arousal but all time to be needy is something. Now, about Dominic, he seems to act like a new or in-between dominant. There are some rules before you are in the 'sub-dom relationship'. An agreement that stated the rules and regulation, but this seems like more of a 'slave-master relationship'.
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A few scenes make me tear my hairs from the head; especially like that time when Gen asked Dominic to act his age and to fuck her and he punished her OR when Preston surprised visited and Gen asked him to fuck him like a slut. No self-control, too weak. Weak to just a word - Daddy. She doesn't think before acting out but expected everyone to not judge her. Sometimes it makes me makes wonder whether she happens to have a split personality disorder. Jasmine might be sleeping on her way up but Genevieve is also doing the same but for a different reason. When Preston whipped her, Genevieve didn't set a safe word so how did she stop him.
This book is honestly amazing. It wasn't one hundred per cent original, but the way it is written and the way surprising things crop up is pretty damn innovative. I didn't find myself thinking that I had read something just like it recently (which I love). All that said, I did spot some pretty out there grammar mistakes, not that I'm a grammar pro or anything, but they were a little noticeable. Usually, when I read stories like this I don't comment on the grammatical errors, but I feel like this book has a lot of potentials,