Afshara Chowdhury

Dhaka, BD

Leo♌ Muslim🕋 28th July🎂🍻

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Obsession

"Obsession" is not bad, but this story had the same typical storyline in most Indian movies. You could attract the readers well, as the plot of the story is not bad. Your writings were good as well but to be honest I lost interest especially in the fight scene. A typical dramatic fighting scene! The fighting scene was soo predictable, Especially are those who have watch Hindi Movies before. Jessica's death was a bit new and shocking as well. I am a happy endings fan as well but there are some stories that deserve a separation-ending; this story does not deserve a sad ending.

My advice would be you better write something that is not soo predictable. I enjoyed it! But I believe you can do better! All the best! Looking forwards to your next work!

-Afshara Chowdhury

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Billionaires Madness

OMG! I just loved it. You know what there are some scenes which are so emotional that I wept. The madness that Hunter feels for Luna makes me feel like someday Luna is going to grab a gun and shot Hunter when she will be not able to control herself. Moreover, Dylan seems to feel guilty for his behaviour now, but when he will come to knew about Luna's new haunted drive; he is going to be on fire. I am so impatient even the thinking of the face-off between Dylan and Hunter. I am waiting! Please update it soon.

-Afshara Chowdhury

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The Monster We Hide

The book was kind of a roller coaster. A mix of curiosity and excitement was there always. When they got married I thought the story is finished; the other chapters were like a cherry on top of the cake. I knew that they would win the battle but the death of her was too painful. It was completely unpredictable. I loved the plot of the story. It was amazing. it was one of those stories that if we read even one thousand times, we will still willing to reread it.

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The Monster in Me

Well, I am a great fan of these kinds of stories. But there are every few books whose are so exciting. I prefer some book; I mean the ones with fewer chapters but most books have 50-60 chapters and there are so unwanted details in it. I really enjoyed the book. I seemed like the whole incident is happening in front of my eyes like a film. There were some grammatical and spelling mistakes but those are not some visible so it is ok, I guess.

9/10

I can say that this is one of my likeable stories.

Looking forward to your production! All the Best!! Waiting for your other stories to read.

-Afshara Chowdhury

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Not A Dream

I like it; especially the "little rose" part, it was the best! I enjoy reading it a lot and I was totally hooked up with the story! Since the chapters are quite short, I guess it is better if you update it soon. It took me around 45 mins to complete all 13 chapters. I am looking forward to your work; especially this one. I guess I am a quick- reader that's why it took me less time. Anyway, what I mean to say is that if you can update the new chapters a bit soon then it is better. Cuz' this delay might hamper your reader's interest in this book "Not A Dream".

Looking forward to your works! Update it sooner, please! Waiting for it! All the best for your future production!

You are going to continue it, right? I mean there are a lot of writers who basically starts a book writing but does not finish it. I hope you will finish, you won't leave us in mid-road.

-Afshara Chowdhury

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Her Protective Deputy

This book has a lot of points that took the book towards popularity. The father-daughter love, the jealousy between siblings and mostly because the love between Aria and Mason that leads them to have a wedding as well as a baby. There are many people who love someone deeply and truly, but there are very few people who I willing to sacrifice themselves for love. I know it is a short book, but there are quite a few writers who can write a beautiful story in a few words. I mean, there are only 14 chapters and the whole story is so beautifully described.

I loved the book! Looking forward to your production!

-Afshara Chowdhury

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THE BILLONAIRE BOSS

I really like the book and I was kinda hooked-up with the story. I like it and will to wait for your update.
Btw, you seem to copy-paste the first chapter twice.

Your writing skills are not bad but it is just that it is kind of paragraph writing novel; it would be better if you separate the dialogue of the main characters from the description of the place and situation. Rather than that others are alright.

Looking forward to your production!All the best! Update it soon! You are going to finish your book, right? I mean there are a few writers who seem to forget about completing the book and leave us in mid-way. You won't leave us, huh?

-Afshara Chowdhury

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That Billionaire

I like the plot of the story, but I can't tell you about the whole story since there is only one chapter.
It seems like you almost forgot about this work. I was quite interested in reading this but I guess I have to forget about it.

Update it soon. I am waiting for it for a quite long time.

-Afshara Chowdhury

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Sexual Attraction to Mr.Mafia

Well, since childhood I am into Gangster and Mafia kind of stories; but there ate only a few books that are good.

Your work is one of them, I really like it a lot. The family drama with Ana was the best!

I loved your work. Looking forward to your production and update soon. Waiting for it!

-Afshara Chowdhury

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Trapped with the CEO

I really like the concept of this story, I was totally hook-up with the story. But I would like to say that you better check your writing before submitting as there are some spelling mistakes in your work. Except that everything else is up to the mark.

Looking forward to the next chapters of "Trapped with the CEO". All the best!

-Afshara Chowdhury

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Greed

I kinda like the story as well as the plot. I was kinda hook-up with the story. By the way, I looked for it in Wattpad, but could not found the whole story. Which is a bit sad, to be honest. Your writing skill is quite good, I totally loved the plot. I was kinda hoping that you will post it in Inkitt as well; as in many countries; Amazon is still not available.

Looking forward to your works. Wish you all the best!

-Afshara Chowdhury

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Adore

I surely love the plot though it was one of the common plots, the story is a bit boring... or should I say it is quite slow. I tried to keep reading as there are only four chapters so far, but I could not.

Well, your writing skill is not bad, but the problem is that you can't keep the readers being interested in the story.

I don't think I will recommend it to anyone if I could not able to tolerate it, how can someone else.

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Billionaire Maid

Well, I tried to hook myself with the story but I could just stand it for three chapters not more than that. I think that plot could have been more interesting if the main lead character; Dorles could play hard to get; this might have made the story a bit more interesting.

Well, your writing skills are not that bad but I guess you can do write it in English the whole story or what eng sub in parentheses where you write in another language so that people can understand it properly.

Hope you will look after the mistakes and try to solve it and present it in a better way! All the Best!

-Afshara Chowdhury

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Trial Dating

Well, I like the plot of the story. I am a bookworm person as well as a picky; satisfying me is either quite easy or too difficult. I could relate this main character with me honestly speaking. It seems like I got to learn a lot of things from it; one thing for sure that is having confidence in yourself.

I must say that you have a quite good understanding of writing style. Looking forward to your production! All the best!

- Afshara Chowdhury

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