What is your opinion?
Nicely done
"This was definitely more interesting than I thought it would have been. The beginning started off with such a hook that it kept me interested but then some chapters seemed to be slower than others. I wish there had been more scenes with Neal and Sophia like the one in the painting room. That, to me, was the first sign of romance, really. Otherwise it seemed a little like his feelings came out of nowhere. The twists were well placed, leaving me thinking one way and having it wind up the other way. The ending was vague enough to definitely warrant a sequel, which I will be more than happy to read also. All in all this was a pleasant read."
Very good read!
"This is a very good read, that got me in quickly. It had plenty of twists and turns to keep the reader entertained. The world building was very good and detailed helping one envision the story. The relationships between characters was strong and believable. I think it needs a quick read through to pick up a handful or errors before it is perfect. I urge this author onwards and upwards with their writing."
