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Elizabeth

"I love this. This story is very interesting I can't stop reading."

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Mr.

"Good plot wonderful syory"

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The Pharaoh's Soul

"This book is absolutely wonderful! Each chapter gets more interesting and before I knew it I'm up to the latest chapter. This book is extremely interesting, I can't wait to see what happens next!"

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Loved it!

"I love the plot. It's quite creative and beautiful. Rebel's character is charismatic and charming. I absolutely love her. I love the suspense and the mystery it creates, especially around Adri. There's just one thing I don't like about the novel: language. The punctuation especially, is sometimes misplaced which is why I gave it 3 stars. Nonetheless, the plot is amazing so I gave it 5 stars🤩😍"

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Gripping plot and identifiable characters

"A great plot and characters that I found to be likeable. Really looking forward to an update. Can't wait to see what happens next!"

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The Queens soul

"Good book."

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Awesome story

"So unpredictable! Love it"

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The pharaohs soul

"It's soooo good!! Can't wait for the update!"

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Such A Creative Concept

"Pharaoh's Soul, like its main character, is one of a kind. This is a true adventure for the reader's imagination, as we witness the herione discover her true self amid some very crazy things happening around her. There is a lighthearted vibe throughout this story that fits well with the sometimes humorous and genuine main character. The plot itself is well designed with new twists and turns happening at just the right time. It almost has an Indiana Jones feel, possibly mixed with Percy Jackson. Overall I think this is a great start to something amazing. There are some grammatical issues to clean up, but this isn't anything a good read through or editor couldn't fix. Overall, great work!"

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Love's this

"❤❤❤💜💜💜❤❤❤💜💜💜❤❤❤"

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The Pharaoh's soul

"The concept of the story was awesome other than the writing style I would like this to be more prolonged and a lot more descriptive but overall it has an excellent plot and I love characters so far."

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Time Travel story

"The plot is interesting. Though the author could be more cohesive with the plot like smoother shift changing from one character to another. Spelling and grammar applications could be used."

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