What is your opinion?
Thumb Up For it
"This writer captures a hospital scene so well it's captivating. We are waiting for update to know how the story builds but I have no doubt, from where she has gotten so far, it will be an excellent piece altogether. Keep up the good work, CL."
Awesome
"The pain Ceres goes through is really natural. And i am really sad for those who end up in hospital like this. hats off to your efforts. its actually a good read. Other than some grammatical issues, the author has a superb writing skill. grammar can be brushed any time soon. keep it up."
Short and Sweet
"There's are a few problems I have with this book. I'm not sure if I like the small summary at the beginning of every chapter, especially the first one where it actually addresses the fact that it's a summary. The entries are short. There's no need for a summary. There are also SUPER long paragraphs that should be chopped up. While I do understand that Ceres may not want to pour feelings out if the hospital staff reads his journal, sometimes the writing feels unemotional. For a bigger impact, especially coming from someone who experiences a lot of pain, you want to bring that out. But all in all, it has a lot of potential."
Love it!
"I love the book so far, there could be a little more emotion in the way Ceres writes, she seems a little emotionless to me, and your grammar could use a few tiny tweaks, but this is only based off of the first six chapters. The way you tell the story is definitely unique, and I love it, I've read very few books written like a diary, and I read a lot thanks to my school's curriculum, and it's decently helpful how you explain the events before the chapter in a short sentence. I'd say this is going to make a great RomCom! Keep up the good work! :3"
Good start!
"Delightful read so far! I really like the slightly all-over-the-place, yet somehow concise writing style"
