Totally,this s a story that kept me glued to it. A nice narration of a true love story. It is a journey of mallika's hardship in missing her best half, a magic pocket watch through which she tries to get her husband back to life, but failed.. And a sudden and a thrilling encounter with time.... Karma was explained in an astonishing way..
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Even though, in the initial part, it was bit confusing to understand which is past and which is present...it was actually too good as the story moved on.. Particularly after the old man "time" comes into picture.. Overall... I loved this story... Wow.. Loved your work.. Great.. Keep going..