Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

Good Fanfiction

"Once again, another good Harry Potter fanfiction with twists that even the original author might be impressed with."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Awsome

"I love this book so much its really really really good! I basically almost sleep on this fanfiction"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
The rebel malfoy

"I love this book. The character development is amazing the plot is great overall it is a really good read"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
The Rebel Malfoy

"Very interesting and creative. When you write an original piece you will have no trouble with developing a solid plot."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
UMMMMMMM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

"Mother, this is an AMAZINGGGGGGG story. Like Hedwig said, you have the perfect balance of the real story and your version. I love the way Kaida and Malfoy's relationship is. If only he was like that towards everyone. You made this story so amazing!!!!!"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
AMAZING

"I love your story soooo much!!!! It the perfect balance between the original story and your version!!!! I love it!!!"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
AMAZING!!! Spectacular!

"This is amazing so far! The characters are amazing and I love Kaida's character and her attitude. Please write more soon!! This is very good and I want to know what happens later in the story. Great job. I love it!"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
GOOD?

"I havent read all of it but its good so far"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Great job

"It's nicely written. I like the way you've written it, your style is really good. And I like the choice of character, since Kaida helps us see a whole new side to Draco Malfoy. I think you could go with being a little more descriptive but it's a good story."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation