The Undefined Story by Shivanig at Inkitt
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The undefined Story

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Summary

Relations are made by God, the day we are born - none can change them. it's called destiny. Join me in the journey of a mysterious ride of arnav khushi nandini and Manik.. Where evil overpower

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
8
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
13+

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Devyani, as usual, was walking through the streets of Ram Nagar in Calcutta at 9’0 clock. The old tall lady with a fair complexion, light green eyes, curly black hair with a bold expression on her face with an experience of 38 years as a lecturer in Oxford University, Mumbai. She was a retired teacher who would daily have a walk at night.


It was 9’0 clock, 26th December, Devyani heard a little girl crying loudly, calling out her mother's name…


“Ma..ma ma..am sorry”


Devyani neglected it for a moment and turned for a moment and turned back. But when the same voice was repeated twice, thrice.


Devyani went daringly to Bungalow No. 5 behind few Nilgiri trees.The breeze was very strong as if it would conquer the whole at a time, with a single grip.



Clouds had set in the sky such a way that it eats all the stars in the sky and a moon had hidden somewhere fearing for the gangrenous danger clouds.


As Devyani entered in the backyard she was shocked to see the beautiful scenic beauty, a variety of flowers, consisting of roses, Daffodils, tulips, including beautiful orchids, she felt though Gods of Heavens has poured their beauty, pleasure their or nothing minds to say if heaven's on earth.Seeing this Devyani had forgotten to what exactly she had come there for.


She was standing still as if her mind is playing with her as if she lost herself in something.


After nearly 5 minutes she came back to consciousness when she heard again the voice of a little girl calling her mother


“Ma..ma”


Devyani went daringly inside the bungalow.As she entered the hall, she saw that all the things in the hall were very awkward.


All things present there were very old things it might be a sofa, Vase, photo frame, or a carpet.The most awkward she felt was the carpet; the old palatic chakra on it.As it symbolises something… two guns were hanged on the wall in form, not only this,but there were 5 more swords surrounding it as though they had decorated it.


Devyani slowly went upstairs and saw that there were 8 rooms one after the others.She went on entering each room one after the another,and entered the 5th room and was shocked to notice a small girl lying on the floor.


The little girl was unconscious.Devyani unlucky had forgotten her cell phone in house.She herself with a great spirit lifted the small girl with her and took her to her house with her.


As she went out of the bungalow the door automatically closed with a great friction sound so did the gate did. Devyani neglected it thinking it was due to fridious wind.


She took the little girl to her home, she had hired a taxi.Through taxi, it will take 5 min to her home, & if she goes by walk then it would take 25 mins that is why she preferred to go by taxi as she had carried the little girl with her..


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