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Boobalicious!

"Amazing work! The story was well written, and the sex scene is fantastically hot! The beginning lines are perfect for hooking in the reader with an interesting premise, literally telling them exactly what's going to happen in the story with a single line. I'm amazed nobody else has written a shining review of this story! it may be the fact that the premise of losing control over one's own body is kink of mine, but I still believe the story is unique and mind-blowing in its details. You have a knack for describing a scene with just enough words not to drown the reader, but just enough to waterboard them with arousing mental images. I look forward to seeing the next chapter! Might I suggest magical sex toys coming to life and fucking her? Either way, I'm sure you'll write an interesting and arousing chapter! Keep up the great work!"

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