What is your opinion?
Please keep going!
"I started your series with book 1 and it was almost painful when I got to the end of Part 5 in Book 5 and realized this one isn't finished yet. It's an intriguing and complex world that you've created within the Harry Potter Universe and I for one am loving it. The way Leshia is growing and developing as a character and as she gets older is very believable and easy to relate to, which is a lovely touch. Once I started the story I've become emotionally attached to the characters and have to see it through to the finish. There are a few grammatical and spelling errors but they don't detract from the work as a whole. Occasionally I was confused as to who it was that was speaking but it's gotten better from book 1 till now (I am horrible with dialog tags myself, my poor proofreader has threatened bodily more than once over it). Overall there is very little I can suggest as to improvement. Excellent story! Please please update soon! I need to know what happens!"
