Ever since Lesley father died, she never'd gave up on her journey to the Land of Dawn.
Lesley grew up in the Vance household, where her father presided over the noble family’s security. During an attack by a rival family, Lesley’s father was killed. As the assailants approached the Vance household, Lesley took up her father’s black long rifle and fulfilled her late father’s mission. Tears rolled down Lesley’s cheeks as she fired shot after shot, each one taking down an assassin. The final tear came as the final shot took down the last of the rival family’s men.
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Marie: Truly enjoyable and some great laughs ... can I get adopted by this family !
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Quenda: Overall a good story. Looks like it is in need of a good proof reader as it contradicts itself at times...but overall a good story.
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