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A Magical Journey

"The Heart of the Realm was a highly creative story, full of lush descriptions and imagination. The reader is fluently transported into the middle of a beautiful world as described by the author's vivid composition. Trees, flowers, the sun, the flowers, the sound of the insects, everything is visually stunning - bravo to the the author for his gift at description. The Realm of the Fae is a beautiful, peaceful world and makes the reader wonder at the end what, indeed, will happen to Jessie? There's a great deal of potential here - keep writing!"

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The Heart Of The Realm (Review)

"This book is absolutely phenomenal! You engage the reader with the description in your story and it makes them feel like they're right there in the story itself! The description of the woods and the pool gave me this magical feeling that not many books do to me. Keep working on it! I'd love to read more, and in my opinion.. This book should be published when it's through. Keep up the good work, Laura 💕"

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A Well Span Fantasy

"Beautiful description and great style of writing. Story is unfolding quite too slowly though but it is clear even from this onset the plot will be something."

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Into The Realm of the Fae

"The first thing that you notice about this story is it's smooth and elegant description. It takes it's time to make an effect and then_ bam! Before you know it you are hooked. Since this story is about the realm of the Fae, the writing style goes hand in hand with the concept. The chapters although slow-paced takes it's time in building up the world and the characters. What is even more interesting is the element of surprise where you are unaware of what new things the realm of the fae will now unleash. The MC himself being a quirky humorous character does not reveal much about himself which leaves you wanting to know more about him. Over all, this story is like the slow burn of alcohol that takes its time to settle but when it does you are transformed into another world_Into the Realm of the Fae. (P.S. Don't drink kids, it was just a simile. I got carried away)"

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