What is your opinion?
Well done!
"A very well written and entertaining story. I can’t wait to learn more about each of the characters and see what the future holds for them."
Great Job
"I really enjoyed reading your book. Thank you for sharing. I love how the cats loved one another and took care of each other. What an accomplishment!"
Interesting read
"Good storyline and detail of characters and background. I think this will be the first of many published works. It was easy to read and went from one chapter to the next smoothly. I am impressed with the maturity of the authors writing style."
JayHaven
"Well written, truly enjoyed reading and couldn't stop. Unexpected and exciting ending and I can't wait until the next book to find out what happens!"
Can’t wait to read more
"Well written and exciting story! Very talented author. "
What happens next!!!
"I can’t wait to read the next installment! Well written with interesting characters. Very talented author!"
Excitement Unlimited
"An amazingly exciting story, so well written. The author so perfectly describes the settings and moves makes the whole scene come live.... waiting to read what happens in the next series..."
Fun and Entertaining
"The book was easy to read and entertaining. Every time I finished a chapter I wanted to read one more. Really enjoyed the characters and I'm excited to find out what happens to them in the next book."
Jayhaven Chronicles
"Well Written. Held my interestest throughout. Fun and enduring characters. Will definitely recommend to friends. Look forward to your next novel."
So Addictive!
"I couldn't stop reading, I love this story so much and I'm looking forward for maybe a potential sequel? I love all the characters I think it is such an amazing idea and the love that was clearly put into writing this is absolutely wonderful, plus the grammar is flawless! "
Wonderful!
"You are literally Erin Hunter. I don’t know if you’ve read any of the “Warriors” books, but the atmosphere of your storytelling and even some terms such as “tail lengths” for units of measure and “moon cycles” for units of time are remarkably similar. Overall, I was just excited to see that anthropomorphic animals (not werewolves) can still be the forefront of a dramatic tale. I was disappointed that my prediction that the cats and the owls would work together to fight the dogs didn’t happen, but you have left that possibility open in a potential sequel. Well done 👍 "
Enthralling but a few minor details...
"Great story! Loved the plot line, but sometimes there seemed to be unrealistic moments. What should take more time to process, it seemed like the characters just accepted and moved on too quickly. Like with panther and the owl empress. To rescue peak should have taken a lot more thought/negotiating but it seemed that she never was an enemy of the cats. At the very least there should be a little back story into her or her thought process at the time. She's made to be this big baddie but then rolls over and gives them exactly what they want without a fight. It's odd. Other than the fast moving parts, I really loved this story. Once it's complete and the kinks are worked out I would totally buy a copy or two and have it in a classroom library as well as my personal one."
