What is your opinion?
Was Not Expecting The Ending
"This story was amazing and highly recommend to read. No boring parts and it just kept getting better and better. The climax was phenomenal and well written. "
The shadowy girl with a teddy bear
"The setting of the scene is perfect. However would have liked it if the main character made it out alive from the building. Good read for people who like horror/scary stories . There are grammatical mistakes there and there. "
Amazing
"Amazing!! Very well written. "
The Shadow in the Flame
"Gripping story from start to finish. Good characters, good plot, developed to the inevitable end. Only a few grammatical errors; missing words,and a few spelling errors. None of which detracted from the story."
Good
"Good book. Scary enough. She drowns in a dry room.😱"
The Shadow in the flame
"Loved it, so intriguing"
Loved it!
"It was an fantastic book. Had me engrossed in it till the last chapter. Surely gave me goosebumps and the last chapter was so unexpected. Paula seemed so innocent."
the Shadow in the flame
"Amazing story, finished quite well. I liked it. All along, I knew Paula was the one, her behavior seemed strange to me."
The shadow in the flame
"It wS great!!! "
AMAZENGG
"hai everything !!! i like everything and everything i like i wud riliy rekemend this setori tu my perents and my frends"
The shadow in the flame
"Great book, keeps you on the edge of your seat"
Sana
"Oh my god..never ever I have read such a horror story..."
Kadero
"Awesome story! Very well written. I enjoyed every page!"
BOO
"GREAT STORY, SAD ENDING"
The shadow in the flame
"I did like this book veey much! It is a rare scary story! I liked it so much the next book i read will be by this author. Also it would be a great true horror movie with a plot not just another slasher mess. Thank u to the author!"
The Shadow in the Flames
"This book has been amazing so far"
The Shadow in the Flame
"Wow! I enjoyed this one. I look forward to reading more."
The Shadow in the Flame
"Andrew, I felt the terror of the hospital fire, the loss of lives, the hospital closed for some 30 plus years, and now, a girl is seen in the upper floors, which opens the religious aspect to your story, faith in what? overall i enjoyed the story, the progression and character development and the plot emerging. i would recommend your book to everyone...........good work Andrew.........."
Shadow in the Flame
"After a truly shocking start to the story, I found the style and content slowed down as the author introduced a varied group of characters who I thought were fleshed out very well. After a slow couple of chapters, I found this story difficult to leave with the tension growing within the house. You get a real sense of desperation with some truly horrifying scenes which left me slightly unsettled at times. The imaginary and description left very little to the imagination. My only criticism would be that the main villain of the story is obvious from the outset, and I think I would have preferred more mystery into the cause of the deaths in the house. Despite this this ending is very traumatic and even though the villain can be easily guessed doesn't take away from the shocking ending. This is a must for anyone to read."
Mrs
"This book is amazing! I got into the story, it was great. Really good idea and hopefully I can walk into a book store and see it on the shelves, pick it up and buy it! Make more stories like this, do a mixture of stories. Keep it up, its really good!"
