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Trevor

"I absolutely adored reading this, I loved the authors writing style. I loved going on this journey with Jane and Trevor, and it will not be one I forget."

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Perfect

"Great story! Well written, suspenseful storyline! Perfect!"

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Nody graud

"Slarker ex abuse ex killer ex soon she'll have enough courage to fight him back all she needs is a little push"

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Good

"Very good I like it"

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Trevor

"Awesome read thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Trevor

"Like the plot. Maybe next time writing a little bit more into detail. But keeping the exitement in the book. But overall keep on writing. Loved it."

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Trevor

"Cool book. Read it multiple times and still love it. "

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Me heart hurts from the cuteness

"Like the plot a lot and the characters being well thought out. Good job! I'm kinda not picky with technical writing skills so I hope you're not offended. The mistakes are minor and don't majorly detract from the story. I'd just encourage a close once-over and re-reading definitions of things like apart vs a part"

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Trevor

"Liked the story and plot line the grammar needs to improve a bit but other wise the plot of the story is amazing and I can’t wait for the next chapters to be uploaded "

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Trevor

"So cute. Can't wait to read about his brothers. "

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Trevor

"Trevor is one hell of a guy. I love that the love making moments are so detailed. That's what makes you want to read on. Good job "

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In serious need of appreciation

"I've only read the first few chapters of this book and I'm seriously in love with the plot so far. But, I was seriously shocked at the lack of comments, reviews and general readers. This book is really good; I feel it deserves more acknowledgement and appreciation."

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Don't want to stop reading..

"Keeps me wanting to read more to find out what happens next"

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Trevor

"I just love sweet stories, good defeating evil, people falling in love... this one is quite good "

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Trevor

"A good story to read"

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