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Me heart hurts from the cuteness

Like the plot a lot and the characters being well thought out. Good job! I'm kinda not picky with technical writing skills so I hope you're not offended. The mistakes are minor and don't majorly detract from the story. I'd just encourage a close once-over and re-reading definitions of things like apart vs a part

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Thrilling, exciting, and wonderful

I may have cried a bit because it got me in my feels. This story is super origional and not like anything I've read before. The plot is complex and well thought out and the characters have depth and are complex. I appreciate the emotional journey the story. Great job!

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Creative

I appreciate the creativity that went into this piece. The mechanics of their world were well thought out. I'd just say that it's not completely necessary to change chapters to change POV's
Hot material too ;)

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Great!

If I could give extra stars I would. It's so well planned and thought out which I appreciate. I felt like the final scene was a little lack-luster but that's just me. Everything else is super

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Cute

One of my favorites
Cute story with real effort put into healing traumas

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Fun!

Fun plot. Author has the ability to combine many (sometimes cliche) subjects and make them feel origional. I read the whole series this far in less than two days, so it was too good to put down! It's not my absolute favorite series, but it definitely earned full marks for sure

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Swoon worthy

Yes, a good classic contribution to the friends to lovers romance. The portrayal of love is raw and unhindered. The development of the characters throughout the story makes you need to read more. My congratulations to the author, a job well done

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Liked it so much I read it twice

Heckin heck, let me tell you about this novel. This is the shiznit. This (presumably) lady right here, Aly, got some good stuff up in her noggin.

This book deserves to be published, and is filled with complex characters with redeeming story archs. A real 'hero' who would put Lord Byron to shame (look up Byronic hero I'd you don't know). There is a whole lot of creativity in this storyline that I have never seen originated elsewhere and it is fabulous. Also, I really appreciate the overarching themes of how essential it is for forgiveness and understanding to be involved as pillars in a successful relationship.

Great job

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Fantabulous

Wonderful to read. A storyline worth following and seeing through. Very inspiring for other writers

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Cute as heck

Omg so cute and interesting. Super fun and a great read, I love the characters and the story line is compelling. Good work!

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Great bag o fun

Super fun and easy to get into. I'm excited to see the ending. The plot feels well thought out and the whole story feels cohesive as a whole and has a lot of depth. Really great work ❤❤❤

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Uh hi there

I hope this comes as gently as possible as it is not my wish to discourage your endeavors or creativity.
There are a lot of grammatical errors, about approximately one every page. This makes it hard for me to truly enjoy the plot and get lost in the novel. There are issues in correct word usage, sentence structure, and other basic grammatical elements.
I honestly just reccomend reading more and taking notice of the language and how it naturally occurs as well as the usage of words. There are some stylistic elements that I simply would prefer, although pleasr don't feel the need to change to please me (literally one reader): you don't have to spell out everything to us, the reader. If Enzo is angry maybe try to describe his physical feelings instead of saying he is mad. Is his heart beating faster, blood rushing through his ears, does his field of vision narrow to his focus?

Thanks for recieving this. I wish you all the best

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Cute!

Really romantic and pulls at your heartstrings. The author does a good job at developing her characters and making them interact with expert in her world. Great job!

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#1 on inkitt

The plot is creative, unique, and cutting-edge. The author has taken her time in crafting a cohesive storyline as well as creating complex and dynamic characters. I find myself searching repeatedly for her updates because I am completely tied up in this story. She has really done an excellent job in thoroughly creating her world and I can't wait to read more! (And see how it ends)

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Fun read!

Has some typos and errors here and there. (Ex: apart vs a part) the overall plot is easy to follow while also being Captivating for the reader. Style wise, I'm picky but I want to say it's pretty good and enjoyable overall!!! Definitely a fun read.

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Fun, but grammar and style needs work

There are a lot of basic grammatical mistakes being made consistently which make it difficult to enjoy while reading. I mean, yes I'm a bit of a stickler for certain things, but there are consistent mistakes. I suggest having a native English speaker help the writer correct mistakes.

Also, the dialogue feels dry at times. Why do the characters have to always be very thorough with what they say? Why is everything explained to the reader? It takes away the fun of filling in the blanks that comes with reading.

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