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Great short story
"This is a very well written story. It gets you in quickly and keeps a good pace throughout. Your main characters are strong, real and likable. It was also an ending I didn't see coming. Well done and keep writing."
A Fun Story
"Setli carries this story! The rambling is endearing. I love how this story starts, and the introduction of Elle. The best thing that can be improved on for this story is a few corrections like run-on sentences, and the over-usage of '...' These can be simple fixes, and I wish you all the best for this wonderful story!"
