What is your opinion?
Omg
"I need number two omg loved this book so fucking much I NEED number two like nowww"
Friend with the Mafia
"This was a good book I oved it. Though there were a lot of spelling errors I still very much liked it. I hope you are writing mosr stories. Your storyline and characters were very though out. I only thought the were her parents let her stay with them and go to Hawaii. That's crazy most parents are more serious and strict they wouldn't let them daughter That's still in high school do that even if their 18."
Friends with the Mafia
"Sooo good love this book great work "
Friends with mafia
"I like your story. Keep it up. All characters are good. Never stop ok good luck"
I loved it
"I like it some of the grammar was hard to read but I still loved it"
Great read!!!
"What a great read!"
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"I love the friendship to the core"
Friends with the mafia
"Love the story could not stop reading It was funny but serious loved the ending "
Friends with mafia
"Such a good book! Defo recommend "
Book
"Good book π"
Friends with the mafia
"Really awesome story loved it canβt wait to read book 2 "
Friends with the mafia
"Very good book and funny but there are some spelling mistakes what need to be recorrected "
Friends w mafia
"GreT book easy to read, keeps my interesed"
Friends with the Mafia
"I really enjoyed this book. Can't wait for the 2and book."
Really good novel π
"Really enjoyed reading your novel π it was really good but I made some mistakes with your spellings. But I love your novel π"
100000000000000 out os 10
"i know this may seem weird but whenever something sad would happen throughout the book i would cry like it had happened to me."
Mafia
"Great boy really enjoing it"
Realistic
"The way the author writes story is amazing, and I write books too so I felt a bit similar. There were also some grammatical mistakes, I understand that because of typing I felt the book this far really good. And yeah I'm also publishing a story inspired by this story. I loved the story line and the thinking...., ππ My story will be published on August 1.. Name of the book: mafiaed Make sur you check itπ ππ Last but not least I loved the story ππ"
Great plot
"Over all I loved the story. It was a bit repetitive at the beginning which can make a reader loose interest. . I don't know, perhaps merging some chapters eliminate that issue . Having read some of your other books I knew that it would be a good story and it definitely was. I personally didn't like Elizabeth's character. She seemed quit immature for her age and her eating habits were unrealistic but I did enjoy the jokes, teasing and banner between her and the boys for the most part. I do believe that her parents would have been more concerned about her where about's than simply accepting that everything is okay with her. Maybe showing this somewhere in the mix would make it seem more believable. The only other thing I would add would be maybe showing a mix of emotions between Ryder and Elizabeth. Perhaps some inclination that he likes her without her being aware of it. The story overall was quite cute and I enjoyed it. . I do believe with a little critiquing the story would be amazing like the other's I have read. Over all a good job."
Book
"You are doing a good job! "
