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Bart Hal mom Nelson

"A good read. Wondering what is happening to charlott. Is Jonah leading him into a trap. It’s a wonderful journey "

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Bartholomew Nelson and the World of Zathya

"Wonderful storyline. A little reparative but fairly well written."

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Brenda

"Absolutely interesting!!! Hope it is published. Has a lot of potential. Even to be developed into a movie series. Would love to watch it on the big screen 😍"

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Bart Nelson and the World of Zathya

"Seems a bit more for younger readers and it’s a bit hard meeting a constant stream of new characters and keeping them all straight per the story "

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