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Appereciation And Commission Request.!

"Just finished your story and I have to say it was truly compelling. Your characters felt alive and well-developed. I’m a comic/manga/Webtoon artist currently taking commissions (covers, pages, scenes). If you ever want to turn any part into visuals, I’d love to collaborate. Let's connect: flemingmichelle28"

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The doctor

"Excellent read. Can we expect more from you or is this a one only. "

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the Doctor

"Great story. You kept true to Twilight canon. Keep writing!"

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The Doctor

"I enjoyed reading this book! Thank you for sharing your work!"

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The Doctor

"I liked pretty much everything and I would recommend it to fantasy lovers especially the one's familiar with Twilight saga.i don't like the fact that some chapters or pages didn't load as others."

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Very interesting

"I loved this book...humanity is not being a human but having a heart kept all the emotions which define a human ☺☺☺"

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The Doctor

"This story is so beautifully written, and it highlights the goods and bads that Carlisle had to go through. It was so incredibly sweet when he finally found Esme again. Totally love this :)"

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The Doctor

"If it was supposed to be all "pre Twilight" there was an error about Alice when she was human. She did not remember anything about her human life and she definitely didn't know who James was. other than that it was very well thought out very well written and I enjoyed it very much this is like my third or fourth time reading it. Good job"

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The Doctor

"I highly recommend this book to people who love The Twilight Saga. Kinda changed my perspective on the whole thing. But absolutely love it"

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The Doctor

"I felt transported into Carlisle's long life. Loved it."

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"I like it lol :) "

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Great Story!

"I'd say it's one of the best Twilight fanfictions I've ever read! Everything from the view of Carlisle was smart as well, so you wouldn't be limited on time. Pretty much all of the references matched the ones on the book, and I believe it was a really good book. Keep Writing! :D"

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The Doctor

"I enjoyed this book. It needed a bit more background on some of the characters but all in all a good read. "

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Excellent

"This story is really good. I do wish there was a more concrete plot throughout the story. However, this is a great overview of Carlisle’s life. It reads more like a journal, but a fascinating one. Also, read this is two days and enjoyed it very much."

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