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A wonderful story with a geat plot

"Great plot keep it up. Onlo r long stories that just keep giving "

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Excellent Continuation

"I appreciate how Aer-Ki Jyr continued the story with ROTA. He captures that sense of abstract scale, of “Wow, these people could sneeze and kill a planet if they’re not careful. And what can we do? Spray some projectiles at a moving target?” He understands the legacy that he's dealing with and gave the good guy’s some enemies that are worthy of the Stargate Universe. If you're a fan of Stargate you'll probably enjoy this."

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Return of The Ancients

"BOY!!! I sure love what Aer-Ki Jyr did with this series. IMHO he captured the essence of what stargate is all about. Thru out the Stargate stories Aer-Ki wrote Stevens and John Shepard some of the main characters in his stories are pursued by a corrupt I.O.A.. All the while Stevens is changing into an Ancient with a great deal of Pain (because of the Pain). They are dealing with more people leaving earth to join in the quest to regain all 36 Galaxies from the enemies of the Ancients. Being a avid stargate fan I found Aer-Ki did a great job in this universe of stargate. I really believe that he should get them published. He followed the theme built up in both SG-1 and Atlantis!!! I really hope Aer-Ki continues to write the Stargate Fanfiction. A overall great read, will hold your attention thruout the stories."

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