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Traduction

"A quand la version francaise"

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Dominate man

"This is really an awesome book so was book 1. I would definitely recommend it to all me reading friends. Can't wait to finish it."

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Dominant Man

"The drama, suspense and the emotions are there. The thoughts and inner monologues are strong. The details were written well. The characters are clear which is very good. "

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Dominant man

"First book was a great storyline and this is proving to be great as well. Honestly, I really would appreciate the writer getting someone to proofread their work. Only problem I have with the book. It makes it challenging at times."

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Dominant man

"Great book but would be better if I could just finish it in peace without having to share "

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When r u updating

"Love the series but hate waiting for update hope the writer will finish the story.been waiting for over 2 months no updates yet"

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Dominant man

"Love both books but the suspense is a killer is there anymore chapters "

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I LOVE this story!

"This series is awesome, I haven’t been drawn into a story this much in years. The characters are so relatable and I’ve literally found myself almost in tears of happiness and sadness too. I REALLY hope you are still writing this and will finish it!"

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Please tell that you still right this

"Hope you to writing love the books"

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Great plot!

"I really love the entire plot and character development, been following the story from wattpad over 2 years now. However, I do wonder if the author will ever complete such a fascinating story "

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Dominant man

"The plot, character building, and story in general is really good"

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Love it

"Amazing story. Capture me straight away. Loved the first book. Can’t wait to read more "

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Not finished

"Gutted the second is not finished. Hate the time I invested in a great story to be left hanging. Wonder if author is not alive anymore that’s why it got abandoned. Looking at the reviews of others they too are pissed it’s not finished "

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Good so far

"Enjoying so far"

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Dominant Man

"Great series, have enjoyed reading. Can't wait to read the next chapter"

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Dominant man

"Awesome so far I read book one in a day, can’t put it down "

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Dominant man

"Love this story so far hopefully doesnt take to long to update"

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Exciting read

"This is the kind of book you wanna read straight through. It keeps you captivated and you wonder what’s next. Looking forward to the rest."

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Finsh

"Please finish the bookies amazing, but then you just cut it off no more I have to know what happens "

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Dominant man

"Love it so far Just wish the books were longer "

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