What is your opinion?
Interesting Story in Egypt
"I've always been fascinated with ancient Egypt. This story really pulled me and I want to know what happens to the twins. I feel the author has done a good job with research because I felt references to religion and Egyptian daily life made the scenes more vivid. I hope he continues with it. I look forward to reading more."
longer
"Cliffhangers are great but sometimes you just gotta make it longer. Your suspense is amazing that's what I like and hate the most about a story. It just leaves me wanting more and it also wants to make me scream at the author and tear my hair out. Great chapter though there are some grammar mistakes. I was also confused about which part goes first. Adding like part 1, part 2, etc will help."
Great!
"I found it intense, but moving. Definitely felt like I was there, the picture was painted so clearly."
Wow!
"I really enjoyed reading this first part of the book, I love the details and I can't wait to continue reading! Excellent writing!"
Tears, Laughter, Suspense
"What part of the novel is this Mac? My eyes were still watery when those merchants suddenly made me laugh. I'll go read the next one. Keep it up."
Wild and Interesting
"I like the premise and believe this will develop into an excellent novel. Keep up the good work. Love the level of detail."
Leaves me wanting more
"This story is quite vivid and leaves me wanting more. I enjoyed the flow of writing that makes it feel almost as if I'm watching it as a movie in my mind. Wildly good!"
Chronicles of Cleopatra
"Mark Bizzio takes us on an interesting historical journey in this book. The plot is woven as smoothly as the dialogue and punctuated with mini cliffhangers to spark our curiosity and make us feel like we are seeing his world through the eyes of a young. Cleopatra. I recommend this book to anyone who is a fan of true adventure in an authentic historical setting."
Cliffhanger
"Wow! that is not in any story or movie Ive found on her."
