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Dramatic!

"I love to read something fast-paced. The writer has a good recipe for visual and emotional experience. I love how the writer leads with descriptive details that gave me an opportunity to step right into a scene. I like the stories about history, and how those moments in time tie into the present circumstances. I enjoy the flow from chaos, to peace, then back to chaos. I could see more of the setting then the writer describes which to me is a sign of a good writer. He clearly defines the terror that a young Ceasar must have felt and the pirates weren't copied from the Caribbean movies like people most do."

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What about?

"Didnt Ceasar like ask them to increase the amount of his bounty? You skipped that part."

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confusion

"I am confused about this book. It's too fast paced for me. Like one moment he was in a crow's nest then he was on Pompey's ship. I think diving the sections will help. There were some grammar mistakes. Also for your other stories, you should add like part 1, part 2, etc because I have no idea what to read next and the order they go in."

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