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What is your opinion?
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Its getting quiet interest
"Still getting to understand the story well ."
Almost there.
"OK. So this is good. I did enjoy it. But you have several grammatical errors that need to be addressed AND the story is just not grabbing me. I DID enjoy it. But it doesn't have that last bit that would make me tell people "you HAVE to read this." But I did like it."
