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What is your opinion?
A beautiful story.
"I enjoyed this moment of realization about what's truly important in life. BUT it is missing that last bit that makes it amazing. There are a few grammar issues as well. I would fix those and mull over this story a bit more. See if you can't latch onto that missing "little something" it needs to put it over the top."
Short, Sweet and Beautiful
"I like the subject of the story. It is nice how deeply a relationship is valued in this short piece. This story shows how who you share your bed with can have an uplifting effect on you and define your life. "
