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Good story
"I like this story but ending was too short .."
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Unique and Compelling
"Love the concept of this story. It's refreshing and keeps the reader engaged. Great characterization also. The author has a lovely writing style too. I thoroughly enjoyed. Keep writing!"
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I enjoyed it.
"Sorry, I am quite late, but yes I did enjoy it very well, but some actions did feel rushed. Some dialogue felt the same and there was a lot, well... not a lot of grammatical error's. But there is potential to improve! So good luck and thanks btw. I like Haythor, he's my favorite character because he is shy like me!"
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"I only read the first chapter, but I love it so far. I like the plot of the story, and the writing style. I want to read the whole story and look forward to the unraveling of the plot,. As always I deduct a star for grammar. There will always be one or two little corrections, that even a editor sometimes misses."
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