What is your opinion?
Good story
"I like this story but ending was too short .."
Unique and Compelling
"Love the concept of this story. It's refreshing and keeps the reader engaged. Great characterization also. The author has a lovely writing style too. I thoroughly enjoyed. Keep writing!"
I enjoyed it.
"Sorry, I am quite late, but yes I did enjoy it very well, but some actions did feel rushed. Some dialogue felt the same and there was a lot, well... not a lot of grammatical error's. But there is potential to improve! So good luck and thanks btw. I like Haythor, he's my favorite character because he is shy like me!"
Review
"I only read the first chapter, but I love it so far. I like the plot of the story, and the writing style. I want to read the whole story and look forward to the unraveling of the plot,. As always I deduct a star for grammar. There will always be one or two little corrections, that even a editor sometimes misses."
