Facinating

"Great work here. You captivated the emotion and dread of our protag Diana. And the mystery intentions of Kyle. I would of loved to see a bit more scene depiction. But for a short story you expressed what was needed in this format. Leaving the story open ended with unanswered questions [ if intentional] was an interesting touch without a resolution which most stories harbor too much on. Like a cliff hanger in a style of and ocean sailor [ we got no clue what where or why. But we know who at least. Once again well done.."