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Want to read more

"I enjoyed reading your story. I hope you write more and fill us in on what happens next."

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"i love how much heart u put in it capturing real feelings"

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"watch"

"Rashel, once again you have impressed me so much, I loved the plot of this story, your writing style...OMG it's so good! I love this story sosososo much, unlike your other story it actually has capitalized 'I' s and i am so happy to see that improvement! -Trinity"

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Watch!

"You have an amazing plot, I do think you need to go back and edit a bit, but those are just minor details. I will keep reading when you keep writing! Warmly, 💜Munchkin💜"

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"I do not want to give review for this story"

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