A.I Medina

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Fantasy, Adventure, Romance, and SciFi author and writer. Check out my YouTube channel click globe below.

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Impressive!!

Thank you for reviewing my story once again. I wanted to tell you that I went into this story blind, with no expectations of how awesome it was going to be. I have never read anything like this. You start it out like any other normal story and then dive right into the action. Your descriptions of the events are fascinating and sad, as it is only the beginning. I am curious to know what made you come up with this idea for this story? Impressive! Keep writing more updates to your book. I always wondered about the afterlife and others. I am glad I get a peek at it. Very great, well written details and descriptions.

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Hello,

Kudos for not making your story so long in chapters to read, as well as keeping some chapters short..

Some chapters read better than others, but I do like the way you write and express your characters feelings, emotions, and setting. The story develops a bit slow, it makes for a good read.

Great job on your book!

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Good, but let's make it better.

Your story itself is great from beginning to end. There are a lot of drama moments and moments that make you think. Each character develops adding more interest to the story. The story starts out with a bang, and develops from hurt, pain, joy, and love, all in one.

I strongly recommend going back to edit your story. It does need some work. It is frustrating at times when things don't make sense due to grammar issues. If you fix those issues, it would make for a better read. I find myself wanting to make more corrections and edits than actually getting to enjoy the story. At times certain things feel out of order, but it is due to your structure. If you organize it better, it can really have that capturing tone.

I am sure if you dedicate some time to fix those issues, you can improve this story wonderfully. Great work! It takes guts to showcase your story. Please consider this as constructive criticism. I have been there before where you are at and have gone through that phase as well. If you follow through with what I and several others have stated, you will be a much better writer in the future.

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Awesome Story!

Thank you for reviewing my story.. As promised, I review yours.

This story is unique to the core. It is in its own little world, but greatly expands. Sign me up, I want to be an agent at this division and receive my super human powers! There is great detail in the characters and the surroundings. Maybe a bit too much giving us little to visualize it to a further extent. I love the futuristic setting this story takes place in. It feels like I am reading an overpowered comic version of X-Men with the characters being able to do insanely cool things, beyond of what I have read in other stories. Definitely a great read for those of you who love to read late at night.

I could see this book getting its own TV series! Great job Michael!

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Want to read more

I enjoyed reading your story. I hope you write more and fill us in on what happens next.

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Absolutely beautiful story!

I have not read such a touching and motivating story like this one. You dare go above and beyond, and you bring your characters to life with the many incidents that happen. I like how you express everything in order. The chapters you keep fairly short, but interesting. Every chapter is filled with that OMG moment or WOW, that makes you keep reading. I was never bored while reading.

If you can go back and edit this story, fix some grammar issues and others, you will have a perfect story. Space out your paragraphs to allow for a better read. Use Microsoft Word at home or online to help you with this. Spell Check your writing too. Some words are misspelled or used incorrectly. You can still understand the story, but it would read better.

I really enjoyed the depth of your writing. You go straight on to an issue that some may be afraid to write about. You are brave for making a book that deals with racism and addresses various issues within your plot. I would love to see your book in bookstores and in schools. I can actually see a movie being made from this book.

You get 5-stars from me! Great work on your story. Keep writing more stories. You have the talent!

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Review Overdue

Remember me from a while back, we owe each other reviews!
Here is yours.

Your story is very intriguing. I like the Chinese aspect to it. I hope that is Chinese I read. The names of the characters are unique too. While you did state at the bottom of the chapters who they are and what do the names mean, it would be good to write out the translations to some of your dialogue also. You have a very interesting story, and I hope you develop more into it.

Cheers!

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I have enjoyed reading this story

Your story is definitely out my of my usual zone, but I decided to read it anyways. Readers and writers can both learn many new things when we do this. As agreed, here is your review.

I will start of by saying that, while this story is long,. it is great to read. I felt as though there was always something happening throughout each page, which made it interesting to keep reading. We start out by knowing a little bit of details for each character, as they develop and progress throughout the story. The story flows smoothly and builds up. You describe the situations of your characters well. It must be tough for anyone with anxiety to go out and make friends.

The good thing is your main character did. I like how you did not just keep her shy, awkward, and showed us that any limitation can be broken. Just like in real life, someone with anxiety can fall in love and share many great times with friends and their special someone. Having anxiety does not mean you are a loner or someone who never wants to have friends.. It is an actual issue that affects many people. Hopefully, others who can relate to this will enjoy reading your story. The pen pal development makes it feel as it is another story within the story. I like that because you immerse it, making it fit nicely giving us more details.

I will not state the same as others have, as they have touched on what happened in some scenes or what is missing. I will include what I caught at a constant.

As stated before in some comments, your story would read better if you add more breaks in some paragraphs and after each person speaks. Some chapters feel very long and never ending. Perhaps break your chapters into two continuous chapters or shorten them to get to the main point of your chapter. It would flow much better. and read better too. Your writing is impressive. I can feel the dedication you put into your story to make it come to life. You let us feel how the characters feel.

To those of you who like teen drama and high school flings, this is your book. It was out of my comfort-zone, but like I said, one can always learn something new. Congratulations on a wonderful story!

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BRAIN is awesome!

After taking some time off, I decided to finish up on reading some stories that I needed to catch up on.

BRAIN is complex and interesting. I like how you define the perspective of a thinking AI program and amplify it to the extreme. I was studying programming while reading this and began to think about the amount of code that it would take to create such a thing as BRAIN. It is possible, but Heck No, I would not create such a program.

Some chapters are so full of detail but other chapters were a bit hard to understand. You would have to know a lot about computers, programming, and some logic with science behind it. I can see this as a mini series on TV.

I did enjoy reading your work and enjoyed being taken into a new world of this genre.

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Great read!

I owed you your review from a while back. Thank you for reviewing my book from before. As promised, here is YOUR review.

I like how you connect everything in your environment to make the story flow. You don't just make it about mystery and suspense, but there are also some parts that make you smile, laugh, and think. I was intrigued from the beginning to the end. When reading through the chapters, I often found myself imagining the scenario and trying to find out what could this or that be. I have enjoyed reading your work! Finish it because I am sure there are others who want to read more. Great work!

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Intriguing!

Very interesting start. You build up the suspense nicely. I am curious as to why the jump from 1920 to 2020. I hope you write more to this story.

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I am amazed!

Your poetry is amazing! I like your choice of wording and how you express it. I would have love to read more! You have an amazing talent with your poetry. Great work!

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Read at night

As promised from my post, I am giving you a review, tis a bit overdue, but it is never too late.

I have enjoyed reading your story. I mostly read it at night since I would have more peace and quiet.

This is a different perspective of vampire and witch genre. I did not know a half-witch and half-vampire was even possible. Good mix however. I see that the vampires speak Bulgarian. I would have loved to see more translation of what they were saying, and interactions. Maybe some curse words or so towards our main character..

I really like how you make certain chapters stand out in detail. The way you describe the surroundings of what Leighton experiences is tough, sweet, and strange all in one.

It is very intriguing. That one surprise near the end was a big WOW moment. I will not spoil it for others, but definitely recommend to read and find out for themselves.. Great job and great story!

Friendly reminder, please review mine.

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Intriguing

I like your writing and description style. I also like how you keep the chapters flowing as each is its own little surprise. I am curious to see how this story turns out and would like to read more.

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Great story!! I would like to read more!

As stated, I will give you a review of your story.

Your characters are introduced well and the plot develops little by little. I like how descriptive you are in letting the reader know what the feelings and emotions are that the characters are going through, like when they growl or have that awareness.

If you can remove the numbers of words at the start of your chapters because it may cause certain readers to turn away as they may see it as too much to read. No book really contains the number of words on top. Rather, let the reader dwell into your story and even if it is 1,000 words or less, that is why we read. Our minds won't register the number of words regardless.

In one of your chapters, you state that you forgot to add in an attribute to your character, Arianna's shyness. I would recommend to take out that part completely and add in the shyness somewhere in the beginning to your story to fit. This way, we will know from the start how she is and the story flows and continues without interruption. You need to also capitalize the beginning of most of your sentences. If you write directly on Inkitt platform, copy your text to Microsoft Word and run a quick spell check. Or use another Word Processor to spell check there. Once complete, copy the text over back to Inkitt and this will at least help you with grammar and punctuation. Most important, save your work!

Overall, great story! I love how Arianna is finding out things and it is all a mystery as to why. Keep writing and finish this book! Cheers!

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Super interesting from the start

I was hooked on how you started describing everything in great detail. I can imagine the settings and environment perfectly.. I've yet to finish your story, but I am fascinate by the way you make everything flow. and make sense.. Great story!

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