Great story!! I would like to read more!
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Your characters are introduced well and the plot develops little by little. I like how descriptive you are in letting the reader know what the feelings and emotions are that the characters are going through, like when they growl or have that awareness.
If you can remove the numbers of words at the start of your chapters because it may cause certain readers to turn away as they may see it as too much to read. No book really contains the number of words on top. Rather, let the reader dwell into your story and even if it is 1,000 words or less, that is why we read. Our minds won't register the number of words regardless.
In one of your chapters, you state that you forgot to add in an attribute to your character, Arianna's shyness. I would recommend to take out that part completely and add in the shyness somewhere in the beginning to your story to fit. This way, we will know from the start how she is and the story flows and continues without interruption. You need to also capitalize the beginning of most of your sentences. If you write directly on Inkitt platform, copy your text to Microsoft Word and run a quick spell check. Or use another Word Processor to spell check there. Once complete, copy the text over back to Inkitt and this will at least help you with grammar and punctuation. Most important, save your work!
Overall, great story! I love how Arianna is finding out things and it is all a mystery as to why. Keep writing and finish this book! Cheers!