Thought-Provoking

"Well done! You provide a sense of simple elegance in your words, and I like your interpretations of love. It really makes one think. There's just one thing that you might improve. You seemed to get a bit repetitive at times, which could be an effect you're going for, or it could just be a lapse in the writing. I'm not sure which. If it's meant to be that way, great! If not, perhaps that's something you could work on. It would certainly make your readers more interested in what you write. But all in all, I enjoyed reading this."