What is your opinion?
Dramatic
"So I just read the chapters. And it's really captivating. The protagonist is a strong girl. The author's writing style is great too. Kudos"
Real Drama
"I only got to review three chapters of this book, but found it quite captivating. While reading, I found myself feeling bad for the protagonist, Charlotte. At such a young age she should be enjoying her life and dreaming of her future, instead she’s busy worrying about her father and missing her mother. I wish there were more chapters to read so I could see what happens to Charlotte ‘s friends and father. Overall, I thought this was a good read, with potential. I will try and update my review once more chapters are posted. "
Nice!
"Your writing style is detailed and easy to follow. The story seems to be going quite fast, but I can't tell for sure because the book isn't completed yet. The characters were a bit cliche, but there's nothing bad about that if you can make them work with your overall story! I saw a few punctuation mistakes but nothing extreme. Keep up the good work! I'm very curious to know what happens next so good luck!"
