Captivating

"To start I would like to congratulate you on making such a riveting tale. The premise of the story held grounds for a typical kidnapping niche story, but you turned it into something spectacular. Truly! From the moment we meet our protagonist and understanding (i don't recall you ever giving a name or gender) their issues, depressions insomnia and perhaps a little wanderlust. I did not recall seeing a description of the protagonist but as a reader I appreciated it. Very rarely on this sight do you find as much detail in the for and background in this perspective. You set the scene that assisted the reader to not essentially sympathize with the protagonist. Instead created a foot place for the reader to feel as though they were in the story themselves. And as a author that is the ultimate goal, so congratulations. I was mildly confused on the ending however . Was the letter written by the protagonist? Or perhaps the uncanny smiling girl at the end of the tunnel? There were a few minor grammar errors such as an incorrect spelled word or a repeat nothing a re read could fix however. Aside from that I honestly have nothing bad to say about this work of yours. It is honestly great and was a pleasing read. Cheers!"