What is your opinion?
The poems are so beautiful
"I've been browsing different books of poetry on here for a little bit since I've recently gotten interested in poetry, and honestly I think this one is probably one of the best out there. The writing style is amazing. You can feel the author's emotion, their longing, their pain, and it's just beautiful. The poems are highly relatable, which also serves their appeal. Overall a great read, I highly recommend!"
Lifeline
"I loved this so much, was extremely deep. I recommend reading this alone in the dark you'd feel the words. Amazing novel honestly."
Lifeline
"I like how this is relatable and people can relate to this And I like how the poems are displayed"
Love they way
"I am not a poet but let me tell you this I love the why you put the words. I love how you describe love and how it feels and how it makes u feel."
Beautiful trauma
"Beautiful trauma, this is when all the what if's will remain what if's and eventually after reading some lines you'll realize the answers that was left unsaid to your questions are just there, finding a soul is easy, but finding a perfect match to bond with your soul is a lot harder when you can't find that specific connection you always yearn to have from another soul , and that what makes them "not your other half" I must say this book is so relatable."
Lifeline
"This author and stories relate to me in a lot of ways. I love poetry so I love this book. But I mainly love it because it's real not fake. "
Amazing
"I love it it was so sweet and sour and the real story of love I love it "
All
"I cry. It just feel so close. "
Lifeline
"This story is so relatable. I love reading this book. It make me cry and have other emotions. I love the writer."
Lifeline Review
"I'm not the type of reader that reads poetry, mainly because it's not usually my go-to but I truly enjoyed this book! It's obvious that as you read through the various poems in the book and the author (you) have a knack and talent for writing poetry, which is a hard thing to come by these days. That being said, there's only one thing I have to comment about. I read in another review someone left that they believe more rhythm would make your great poems better and I agree with that! That goes in hand with my thing. Some of the poems, for my taste anyway, were a little lengthy. I think with a little more rhythm in the poems a little shorter of a length, it could make this book and all of the poems ever more amazing! Other than that I loved spending the time to read these poems and can't wait to see what work you do in the future! :)"
lifeline
"no words It’s so good. This is my 6th time rereading it. This somewhere may sound like a song, which I think is very cool. Overall, it is amazing."
Many of these could be lyrics to a song.
"I like the concepts of your poetry, and as the title says, I think that many sound like lyrics to a song. My favorite section is where you say (I’m going by memory here), “I don’t know why the world is this way, it takes, and takes, and takes, but won’t give. It gave me you”. That is an excellent little saying. Now, I do have a complaint - and it’s only because I think that your ideas are so great that you can do even better (I didn’t dock too much). I think you need some more rhythm. Now, you have some very beautiful monologues here, but they’ll sound more like poetry if you give them a little more rhythm. I really like Tennyson’s “The Eagle”. It may be written out wrong because I’m recalling from memory. “He clasps the crag with crooked hands, Close to the Sun in lonely lands, Ring’d with the azure world he stands. The wrinkled sea beneath him crawls, He watches from his mountain walls, And, like a thunderbolt, he falls.” Do you see how there is a pattern? And I’m not trying to be patronizing here. I see that you can write poetry, but I think it’ll be outstanding if you add some more rhythm. Get it to where you can tap a beat to it (go ahead and tap your finger to the syllables in “the eagle” and you’ll see what I mean). Anyway, well done! 🙂"
Truly Beautiful
"The poems, the writing style, the everything is just beautiful. Every story is alluring, drawing closer those who read it. Each story breathes light into such dark words."
Nice
"There's some nice word play you have going on in your poems. Personally, I find your poems to be a little too long to read (except The Setting Sun), hence the four stars (in writing style and overall)."
