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The best fanfiction I`ve ever read

"OMG It was soo good!!! I really want part 2!!!"

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Ms. Red head and Mr. Ferette

"Everything the whole plot is just amazing the narration the expression everything is wonderful."

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Amazing

"I ABSOLUTELY LOVES TO READ THAT BOOK"

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Loved this! Best spin off story I’ve read.

"This was really great! Your a very gifted writer. "

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Best. Ever.

"A new version of Harry Potter and the Cursed Child! Amazing!"

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very amazing

"I love this book. it's a very good twist on the Harry potter series. well done. good writing. can't wait for more. please don't stop writing. your very good I would love to see more from you and more books like this"

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Great job!

"This is the first story I have read on Inkitt. I have just started watching the Harry Potter movies over again, so this immediately caught my attention. I read this in two days, and it's just amazing! Great job overall, your characters are very vivd and have great personalities."

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Just Amazing

"I'm a big harry potter fan and this book just threw that out of the water. This book was amazing. I found myself always wondering what Ron and Hermione's children would be like and know I know. And the fact that you paired their daughter up with Malfoy's son was just brilliant. Over all this book was just amazing"

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Finished Chapter 35

"Hippocrite is spelt hypocrite. Also it is an awesome story! A good one after so long. I was hoping someone would write a good fanficiton playing off what Ron said at the station. You are doing a remarkable job. It would have been interesting if Albus had also ended up in Ravenclaw though that might be too much of a copy of the original trio, so its better this way. Or if Albus ended up in Slytherin, which would have been so cool. Cause Harry was actually destined for Slytherin, except he chose Gryffindor. The characters are so great! Hugo interrupting with the same talent as his father. Many of the characters are so on point! Anyways, I reached chapter 35. I hope its not done it was so good."

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