What is your opinion?
Very interesting, sad, exited happy allot of emotion, to, like how she forgive and help sam out, love how she find love again with ethan, hate what her husband, recommendthe book to a friend, rate it 10
"How she’s a lawyer and con’t w/her life even what her husband did, also how she help out Sam and find love again, dislike her husband a abusive way and how he’s trying to manipulate and controlled her life so she will not get citizenship, "
Nice work!!!
"The story is quite catchy. Only the first chapter and its really interesting. There are a few flaws here and there. Grammatical errors and misuse of punctuations. Apart from those great work... Looking forward to more amazing chaps! "
Interesting but Grammar Errors
"Like I said in my comment, this is a really interesting start to this book, but also like I said in my comment, there are quite a lot of instances where you switch from past to present tense and some other grammar errors. Your writing style was pretty good and I can't wait for more of this story, it definitely hooked me in and made me all intrigued for what will happen next. Keep up the good work, just fix up those grammar errors and it's a great start!"
Time will tell....
"I would have given this whole story a 4 star, but this is only the prologue, so this may be biased right now, But overall, you did a pretty good job setting who the characters are. But not enough information though (NOT A BAD THING!). But I do look forward for more, try to fix the problem that inkitt as with us, ya know, making it seem that we didn't start a new paragraph even though we did. Try breaking that guideline, it won't do any harm after you publish more chapters. Now for your end of the bargain ~Yours Truly, Ruenigami."
Nicely done!
"I enjoyed the prologue to this story. It is definitely the beginning of a great book. However, There are a few things that I would change. For example, the tenses are all thrown off. In one sentence you're in the past, then you're in the present, and it makes it a bit difficult to read. I would also be aware of run-on sentences or sentences that don't really make sense. Run through your writing with a fine-tooth comb and find the parts that don't make sense while you're going through it. They usually stick out from the rest of the good writing. Overall, though, it was very good and I look forward to reading the rest of it. If you could read and comment on one of (or both of, your choice) my stories, it would be greatly appreciated. Keep on writing!"
