What is your opinion?
Rejected the fallen angel
"Good story ...good plot ...I want more 🙂🙂"
The alphas rejection
"I like the story. Damien first mate Jackson hates gays but changed after he meets his second chance. Jealousy ya let's see what happens next. I went to school with a guy who was gay. The Jocks chased him out! I hated school seeing how they are. I have never been back. If they couldn't except a gay man in 1983 I wonder how many are gay now?? The truth of the matter They hurt my friend and I will never forgive them. We graduated without him so unfair. "
The rejected abgel
"Amazinng best book ever plzz continuee ittt i love it sooo much its the perfect combination of reality mixed with the supernatural and turns into smexyyyy....i love u author Stay amazing!!"
NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!
"Can you put quotation marks around whatever the characters say please? I got the hang of figuring out when they're speaking but I have ADHD and my concentration sucks lol if I have to figure something it in the middle of reading I'll start think about random shit like cookies or the color of the sky at certain times lmao"
Love this story. Need more chapters please!!!!!
"Love the story. Waiting for more chapters. I really got in to the it so,far. Need more,chapters please!!!!!!!"
Rejected the fallen angel
"This book is amazing and I can't wait for more oml "
Wow....
"I really like it so far cant waot to see what comes up next. "
Omg
"Is there going to be more???? I couldn't stop reading it please let there be more I'm dying over here not knowing I love the book. "
😍😍😍😍😍
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Fallen Angel
"I really the book so far. I would to see more of the story."
Editing required!
"As others mentioned, this needs serious editing. More quotation marks, less !!!! As it is, the story sounds interesting but is too painful to read for me."
Before you go,
"I love the suspense, at a time I thought it was about to turn to a menage but there was no chemistry between Thor and Jackson. I can't wait for what happens next. Pls don't wait too long. "
Needs a fixer-upper
"This has the potential to be a great story but several things need to be done before it can be one. Firstly, quotation marks are needed so the reader knows who is saying what at which time. Secondly, maybe put what the wolves are saying in italics so the reader knows who the humans are and who the wolves are. Thirdly, edit the paragraphs so only one person is speaking per paragraph because there were some paragraphs where it looked like there was more than one person speaking."
Rejected the fallen angel
"I wanted to read this book because of its plot but after the first page I just couldn’t because of the lack of speech marks and despite the fact being rejected is supposed to be painful and heartbreaking, that process isn’t described properly-it isn’t in detail except right after the rejection. Tip: learn how to show not tell eg . I felt hurt ➡️ At the mention of his name, my heart plummeted as tears swelled to the brim of my eyes, threatening to overflow. I am not trying to be mean or anything it just that I was really disappointed when it said it was rated 5.0"
Needs work
"The quotations are missing to let the reader know the characters are actually speaking. The grammar is too bad to enjoy the story. I think you should work on the grammar. I did like the cover and the plot but it was developed poorly."
