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Ahhh soo good

"I'm loving this sooooooo much, I love the plot line and the characters (most of all the kids they're so cute!) I love your writing and I hope you continue!"

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"I really like the plot so far and I really like that its really interesting. I think its really col how it is made of a myth from a long time ago and that its a modern timeline."

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Queen by a Deal

"I am absolutely in love with this story! The plot is amazing."

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Pretty good!

"This story is really good, the plot has a few holes in them, but overall, it's amazing! I love the way it draws you in, adding suspense and an aura of mystery! Please write more! I love the part where Corrinne feels drawn to Aides!"

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(TvT *) /beautiful

"I found this on pinterest and it's unexpectedly beautiful. Keep writing! Roses too? I'm soft and this hit me hard "

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Awesome! Please continue!!

"It was absolutely amazing! Can't wait for more chapters!!"

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Queen by a Deal

"The novel has a great storyline and is sure to be a great fantasy story."

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Queen By A Deal

"It was so unexpectedly beautiful. "

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