Fantasyworld112

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Very intriguing and imaginitive

At first, I hated the style, the short choppy sentences that drove me crazy. Then they grew on me, I couldn't read ahead and ruin the story! I also didn't get lost in the sea of thousands of pages for each chapter. The plot is very unexpected and action-packed, I think it's a little cliche, but overall, this is a story to be read! Can't wait for the next one!

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Pretty good.

I like it, the plot's a little cliche, but interesting.

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All the feels...

This is a great book, it should be published! There are a few spelling/grammar mistakes, but none of them take away from the story. You'll grow very attatched to the characters, and probably die along the way. Have fun!

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Wow

Intersting read, a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes, though. I don't like the Hermione X Draco ship, but this story really opened my eyes to how cute the ship is!

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Eh...

The story isn't bad, it just doesn't make a whole lot of sense. We see Hermione and her mom and dad in the 7th movie and the 7th book. Grammar isn't the best, but it didn't take away from the story. If you're willing for a new perspective on Hermione I would suggest reading this. I believe this story is very vague, it doesn't even say what year this is, but it's an interesting PoV.

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Pretty good!

This story is really good, the plot has a few holes in them, but overall, it's amazing! I love the way it draws you in, adding suspense and an aura of mystery! Please write more! I love the part where Corrinne feels drawn to Aides!

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