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Hope from the Stars

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Summary

Hang on tight, for we are on a journey. N/A

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Her hair as brown as chocolate

Her eyes soft and sweet

So gentle

So kind

Our mother

Shining like a star

She smiled her way through life

Even when dad left

Even when we were devils

She smiled

She showed kindness

She was mother

But as the leaves turn brown

Her smile grows thin

Her skin gaunt

And thin

She coughs a lot now

Stays in the house

Now as the evening dies down

She lays here in this small bed

Smiling as she holds our hands

Me and brothers

She smiles and says it’s ok

She smiles for us

For him

For the stars that dim with envy

And then let’s go

Leaving us within the night

To guide us from the stars

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