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Daddy got drunk again, and I don't know what to do...
mama,
i couldnt find you this morning. i looked all over the house but you werent there. all your clothes were gone and so was your jewelery.
daddy said you left me. i dont believe him though. you wouldnt leave me!
if you did leave then i hope you come back soon! until then im going to practice so i can write good just like you!
i love you!
hadley
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Cora: Decent story. Slightly predictable turn of events but I didn't think at this point it was a possible twist! I enjoy the stream of thought writing style this has, though some proofreading and punctuation could help a few spots. Recommend this for ebooks and forgive a few confusing errors. Enjoyable t...
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Helhall: Before anything else, I’d like to emphasize that I really did like the overall story. Characters were more than two-dimensional, so definitely a plus. I didn’t even mind the shifting points of view.But...There are a couple of things that made reading the story very difficult.1- Punctuation is your f...
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libaHuntJT9: With good plots n turns. Good rainy afternoon book.
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Caroline Lawson: This is really high quality writing. The plot is complicated and the characters well developed. It’s the best I’ve read yet!
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Sarah: I really enjoyed your story. It made me wonder how you actually write. Are you someone who plans everything in advance, or do you discover the story as the chapters unfold?
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