Reread a million times
I honestly loved this book every single time I've read it. The plotline is fantastic and the characters are interesting. There are only a few things that stuck out to me throughout the whole story, but they weren't too big.
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I would say that the character's changed attitudes towards things very quickly and their views were hard to follow because they weren't always consistent. I think that the main characters didn't have a lot of time as opposing people, and were almost immediately attracted to each other in some way. I would also say that I was very confused the first time I was reading about the cave, but it all got cleared up once I continued. There weren't any big issues, just little things I've noticed.
Overall Bee, I'd say you absolutely did a wonderful job(as usual) and I wouldn't change anything about the way you write, but things just move a little too quickly.
Hope you're well, as always<3