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Well Done!!!
"This was quit a interesting tale. I had compassion for the Piper but I also felt what he did was wrong as two wrongs don't make a right. I had actually hoped that he had the pipe hidden within the cell and escaped but then what lesson would have been taught. Very well told. Enjoyed it tremendously."
The Pied Piper
"Perfect story of teaching lessons, for the day and age of course...or not"
Original idea
"This is an interesting story, an original idea. It's mysterious from the beginning until the end, so it keeps you reading. It conveys lots of emotions, this is another thing which makes it work. It makes the reader sympathise with a murderer, and at the same time hate him too. The writing style is elegant, the grammar good. Congrats to the writer!"
