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"Great short story and enjoyed reading 💜💜"

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White Russian-Whip #2

"Another great read! Thank you, Author!!"

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White Russian

"Reading this series has been a great distraction. The meshing it does while still being its own book has been great!!! The only thing I would do to enhance the read would be to either take out the full other language or, at the end of the chapter, add a translation so people that don't know the language can see what it was supposed to say instead of being left in the dark...thank you for the series!!"

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The broken ones

" Love it please update "

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opinion

"omg wonderful i cant put it down i love it plz keep writing lol"

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