Inner Feelings
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Inner Feelings

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Summary

Many different thoughts and emotions coming together to help make sense of the world. I’ve been writing poetry for a long while now. The majority of these poems express personal experiences, feelings, and thoughts. Sometimes it’s hard to make sense of what’s going on in my day to day life, so I write a poem to somehow make sense of it all either in the moment or later on.

Status
8yrs ago
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Family, Friend, and Foe.

Friend, Family, and Foe

Always stooped far too low

Forever seeking my demise

Giving them a little chance to rise


Friend, one I trusted

Never have I felt more disgusted

As I dug out the knife you secretly used

I wasn’t surprised, just merely confused


Family, one in which my blood is shared

One which I knew never cared

So as they ate me inside out

I decided it wasn’t even worth a shout

Foe, one I created long ago

One with a soul as dark as a crow

Plotting my death from time to time

But never did it pay a single dime


Friend, Family, and Foe

Barely any time to grow

As once again they plot my demise

I’m too busy pondering how I will rise









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I loved the rhyme in this poem. The message is quite eloquently put too

8 years

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