Customize readability
Aa

Undertale the new timeline

Summary

Join Lola, Imo, Luna, and Twan on a journey alongside two ded humans. *you see me crying. *you dont care. *i cry more. *you care even less No blurb

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

The fall

"Come on you guys! Snails are faster than you!" Lola yelled playfully.

"We're coming dice pants!" Luna hissed rudely. "So don't make it a race!"

"Well at least she's faster than us." Twan pointed out.

"Let's go already guys! My legs hurt!" Screamed Luna.

I wanted to say that my life hurts but as usual I kept my mouth shut. Why where we climbing the mountain? We wanted to see whats at the top. But i heard that there was a hole at the top going down 100 miles. So i could die. Like frisk did. Falling for days. Not looking down and dead. Frisk was my coz and she never stoped talking and I, well I just listened.

Soon I was so lost in though i couldn't see and Twan had to pull me the rest of the way up!Only Lunas punch snapped me out of it and i fell right into the hole.

As i was falling I heard Luna saying "That's one less idiot to deal with." My sister, Luna, happy that i was about to die!!!!!!!!!!! My own sister HAPPY about that!!!!!!!!!!!! Can you imagine yourself falling to your deathand your sibling is happy!?!?!?!?!

Sudenly i could see everyone falling with me! Lola laughing happily, Luna with her hands crossed, and Imo praying for a soft landing. The whole gang was here! I felt happy to be dieing with my siblings but then I felt i stab of sadness and relised that we were all going to die!


Let Mable Pines know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

0

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

0

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

0

Strong Dialog

author

That's it? No post-mortem? No twist ending?

4 years

Further Recommendations

Kaan - Jungfrau gesucht - Gefährtin gefunden

Ulrike Ulbrich: Ich finde die Geschichte fesselnd, gut geschrieben. Die Handlung ist klar und auch die Dramatischen Handlung sind nicht übertrieben in die Länge gezogen. In allen eine sehr erotische Geschichte die zum träumen einlädt und süchtig macht. Ich würde sie jedem empfehlen der was leichtes und erotisch fes...

Read Now
 Mehrfach zurückgewiesene Gefährtin

Silvia: Sehr schön geschrieben, mit Spannung von Anfang bis Ende. Tolle Geschichte .

Read Now
A Blessing in Disguise

Roxann: This was an amazing book. The characters and plot were amazing and you are an awesome writer. Every book I have read by you is just amazing. I thank you and on to the next ❤️

Read Now
Fated to My Ex- Best Friend

Kota2015: A really good read. This is my first time on this web site. Glad I found it!

Read Now
My Blacksmith Savior

MoonlightN🌕: I absolutely love Sully. He's such a mature, patient, and understanding character—a complete green forest. 💚I love Sorsha too. She's strong, resilient, and easy to admire. They're a perfect match, and watching their relationship grow with patience, trust, and love was beautiful.The way their bond d...

Read Now
Luna de Verano - Die Gefährtin des Alphas (Band 1)

C.: Ich habe so oft herzhaft gelacht. Was für eine tolle Geschichte. So schön geschrieben. So schön, flüssig lesbar. Ich lieb‘s. Mir tun die Herren in der Geschichte fast leid, die Frauen sind reine Naturgewalten. Lustig, verschmitzt, offen, direkt. So schön. Danke für diese Geschichte und das wir sie l...

Read Now
The Argent Wolf (Coming to Galatea)

Leah: The character writing in this is lovely. Everyone feels rich and well fleshed out, even when introduced for only a moment. The main female character is strong willed and quickly witted without feeling cliche or overly “not like other girls”. The world is also fascinating and I can’t wait to learn mo...

Read Now
Silver's Second Chance

natstarr: Druid? That’s so interesting. Love these little surprises you give

Read Now
The Luna Trials

Valérie: Impossible de m'arrêter de lire

Read Now